Thanx. Ill keep those things in mind. I'll make it more intersting in part 2. (Yay!!)

I think you should make it longer. It's pretty intersting. I love stories!!!

This is my first story. So, you guys can tell me if you like it or not. (if u say no, that's ok with me. First things aren't always the best)

"Hi!"

Once upon a time, there lived a chao. This chao was a very good chao. Her name was Star. Now, Star didn't grow up like many chaos. Star was abandoned by her parents because they hated her for her charm and beauty. So they shot her up into the sky by a cannon, and Star was never seen again. Mean whil...

This is mine!! :sway: Name: Lin Gender: Female Age: 1\3 Alignment\Type: Hero\Swim\Fly Color\Tone: Pink Two-Tone Personality: She is extremely a happy chao. She loves to be around her friends. When there is danger she turns into a powerful chao. Sometimes, she feels depressed. BIO: She was born into ...

(Hey everyone! I'm new here so take it easy on me. I don't exactly know what I'm doing so if any of you guys (or gals) could help me I would appreciate that. It's great to be here!!!)