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Re: Bad Creepypasta Analysis Time: Subject 7
Lol, "anus eye"
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Re: Bad Creepypasta Analysis Time: Subject 7
YES TWO PAGES FINALLY
This next one I actually found with minimal effort. I kept clicking 'Random Article' on the Creepypasta Wiki hoping I'd find something good (and by good I mean bad), and I did, and boom another subject.
Subject 8: Warrior Cats Lost Book
http://creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/Warri ... _Lost_Book
This one was just really underdone. I mean it looks like it took 10 minutes max. It was very unexplained, because 'I was walking down the stairs', where apparently the writer was just thinking about how he/she was 'a big Warriors Fan', and then just randomly happens to look down and find a book completely unexplained and sitting there in the person's own home, and starts reading it without even questioning it. At all.
The grammar here was also very bad, with spaces between each period in an '...' and subject verb disagreement. (Although after 'last of among us', I've learned to care less about grammar.)
This one reminds me of 'GHOST'. It was obviously written by a fan of a series and the actions in the story heavily dilute the scariness.
Well another subject, stay tuned, I'll find something.
This next one I actually found with minimal effort. I kept clicking 'Random Article' on the Creepypasta Wiki hoping I'd find something good (and by good I mean bad), and I did, and boom another subject.
Subject 8: Warrior Cats Lost Book
http://creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/Warri ... _Lost_Book
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The grammar here was also very bad, with spaces between each period in an '...' and subject verb disagreement. (Although after 'last of among us', I've learned to care less about grammar.)
This one reminds me of 'GHOST'. It was obviously written by a fan of a series and the actions in the story heavily dilute the scariness.
Well another subject, stay tuned, I'll find something.
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Re: Bad Creepypasta Analysis Time: Subject 8
Well it was the week and I was busy and all of that. Time for the next subject, which was suggested by Riku.
Subject 9: Jamesnintendonerd.avi
http://creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/Jamesnintendonerd.avi
This was like the basis of all 'Lost Episode' creepypastas rolled into 2 paragraphs of extreme derp. I mean it uses such worn out phrases as 'The quality was really bad.', 'The game cartridge was blank.', and 'I got the episode downloaded with my 1337 NiNjA HaXxOrZ sKiLlZz.' Also, this was about a freaking Youtuber. It had no basis as a Lost Episode. Even when the guy admits the video must have been edited, it would be a pretty advanced hack to do that, especially since the guy stabs himself, breaks his neck,and then jumps out of a window after.
This even brings in 'The Theater', which unlike anything in this thread is actually a good creepypasta. (Look it up if you want to read it.) In it James apparently gets to the 'Swirly Head Man' pretty fast, but in the original 'The Theater' story it actually could take hundreds of times of playing before you get lucky and get the Swirly Head Man.
In all this one had plotholes, and the whole thing was just far fetched.
Again, Riku suggested this one. I'll see what other scum I can dig up.
Subject 9: Jamesnintendonerd.avi
http://creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/Jamesnintendonerd.avi
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This even brings in 'The Theater', which unlike anything in this thread is actually a good creepypasta. (Look it up if you want to read it.) In it James apparently gets to the 'Swirly Head Man' pretty fast, but in the original 'The Theater' story it actually could take hundreds of times of playing before you get lucky and get the Swirly Head Man.
In all this one had plotholes, and the whole thing was just far fetched.
Again, Riku suggested this one. I'll see what other scum I can dig up.
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Re: Bad Creepypasta Analysis Time: Subject 9
Fun fact, nerds house is only a one story building/a basement depending on the episode..
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Subject 8...Wow, even I couldn't write a worse creepypasta than that. Plus I'm a big warriors freak.
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Re: Bad Creepypasta Analysis Time: Subject 9
Oh boy guys it's time for 10 already. It's time for more of those scary beasts we know as Pokemon.
Subject 10: Pokemon Pink Pearl
http://fyeahpokemoncreepypasta.tumblr.c ... pink-pearl
Oh man it's last of among us all over again. The writer apparently got the game when she was 7, but it looks like she wrote it when she was 4. I mean the grammar was so dumb with 'overwold', 'gruseomley', 'util', and 'understan', as well as a total betrayel of periods and the shift key. I mean this was just obviously written by someone between the ages of 5 and 8.
Also the way it portrays the story isn't that great either. There was just randomly 'spoinks pearl' as the background, and Spoink has nothing else to do in the story. Also with just a MissingNo., the writer apparently 'wizzed' through the Elite 4, where everyone got 'brutialie' killed.
In all this one was just obviously fake and yet another bad grammar monster.
The next one subject will probably be one of the stories from a list of pasta sent to me. Just glancing through the list I can see a Harry Potter spoof and a haunted copy of Mario Party 9. I'll see what I can do with these.
Subject 10: Pokemon Pink Pearl
http://fyeahpokemoncreepypasta.tumblr.c ... pink-pearl
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Also the way it portrays the story isn't that great either. There was just randomly 'spoinks pearl' as the background, and Spoink has nothing else to do in the story. Also with just a MissingNo., the writer apparently 'wizzed' through the Elite 4, where everyone got 'brutialie' killed.
In all this one was just obviously fake and yet another bad grammar monster.
The next one subject will probably be one of the stories from a list of pasta sent to me. Just glancing through the list I can see a Harry Potter spoof and a haunted copy of Mario Party 9. I'll see what I can do with these.
Re: Bad Creepypasta Analysis Time: Subject 10
I don't read any you post anymore unless they take up half your page. Short ones here get to the climax too fast.
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Re: Bad Creepypasta Analysis Time: Subject 10
It's difficult finding stories that are both long and laughably bad.
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Re: Bad Creepypasta Analysis Time: Subject 10
Have you tried reading creepy pasta's theory about how the show Rugrats was made or another story about in Spongebob that Squidwards committed suicide during the episode?
Re: Bad Creepypasta Analysis Time: Subject 10
^Squidward's Suicide?
The new one is a "disgarce" as the writer would say.
The new one is a "disgarce" as the writer would say.
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Re: Bad Creepypasta Analysis Time: Subject 10
there is no way I am reading the Squidward one - just that title has me scared :obufu12 wrote:Have you tried reading creepy pasta's theory about how the show Rugrats was made or another story about in Spongebob that Squidwards committed suicide during the episode?
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Re: Bad Creepypasta Analysis Time: Subject 10
^I red it before, kinda creepy when I finished it and there was videos of it that people made. I'm too scared to watch because there might be screaming during the video and I can get easily scared by screamers.
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^Theyre not real videos, but videos that might be close to the story
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Re: Bad Creepypasta Analysis Time: Subject 10
Crash you haven't ever read Squidward's Suicide? It's like one of the most popular creepypastas ever.
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Re: Bad Creepypasta Analysis Time: Subject 10
^I red that after I saw the Rugrat's theory posted on my friend's wall on Facebook, now I'm reading some creepypasta stories and having nightmares.... Worth it!
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Re: Bad Creepypasta Analysis Time: Subject 10
No, I haven't. But maybe I'm better off not reading it, because I watch Spongebob like everyday and I don't need that to put me off watching it.Blazing Groudon wrote:Crash you haven't ever read Squidward's Suicide? It's like one of the most popular creepypastas ever.
Maybe you could give me a brief description of it, and then I'll decide whether to read it or not ;)
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Re: Bad Creepypasta Analysis Time: Subject 10
It's about a lost episode of Spongebob. It takes place right after the Spongebob Movie, and it's told by apparently an intern who was working for Nickelodeon and was able to watch episodes before they were to air on Nick. It has a few gore moments in it, if that's something you want to know about beforehand.
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Re: Bad Creepypasta Analysis Time: Subject 10
It's best not to read it if you want to rethink your childhood life of Spongebob, but heres the brief description of it if you want to read.
I think I explain what happened in the spoiler, but read what Blazing said about the gore moments before you read my explanation .
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Re: Bad Creepypasta Analysis Time: Subject 10
^ I read the first few lines, and didn't want to read anymore O.O
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Re: Bad Creepypasta Analysis Time: Subject 10
Yeah, scary
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Re: Bad Creepypasta Analysis Time: Subject 10
^ I laughed.
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Re: Bad Creepypasta Analysis Time: Subject 10
I can explain this easy:Vinyl Scratch wrote:Sweet merciful Celestia. This is... Words cannot describe this pasta.
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Re: Bad Creepypasta Analysis Time: Subject 10
I guess I should finally get to updating this thread. Now let's see what story I'm gonna-
Subject 11: Salar the Chao
http://creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/Salar_the_Chao
This was almost something I'd expect to read here on Chao Island. A creepypasta about Chao seems unique but this was still not a great story. The story wasn't believable or scary, and it was arranged very poorly, with a traditional story as half, and the other half in blog style order. I thought it was over, but then there was more. The pictures were also not realistic at all. I mean seriously.
Seems legit.
Also there were the usual grammar mistakes, as well as pointless interventions from the Tails Doll and some unexplained black creature. It really had no coherency either, because instead of doing anything to the guy himself, the chao of evil decides to go for some random guy at the kid's school for no apparent reason.
This story in all was a very jumbled mixture of many story elements. For a beginner I guess it was meh, but still could use some worth with legitimacy. For my next esteemed work of literature, I'll probably go with a suggestion that Starmy PM'd me about Mario Party. Stay tuned with your computer somehow.
I've found my story. Looking at that I thought it was going to be yet another wonderful story about My Little Pony, but alas I was wrong. What I found is even more story worthy. Of all things we get a chao fanfic.Vinyl Scratch wrote:Sweet merciful Celestia. This is... Words cannot describe this pasta.
Subject 11: Salar the Chao
http://creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/Salar_the_Chao
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Seems legit.
Also there were the usual grammar mistakes, as well as pointless interventions from the Tails Doll and some unexplained black creature. It really had no coherency either, because instead of doing anything to the guy himself, the chao of evil decides to go for some random guy at the kid's school for no apparent reason.
This story in all was a very jumbled mixture of many story elements. For a beginner I guess it was meh, but still could use some worth with legitimacy. For my next esteemed work of literature, I'll probably go with a suggestion that Starmy PM'd me about Mario Party. Stay tuned with your computer somehow.
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